Academic Writing

Error Detection Exercise(2)

The following sentences contain errors. First , detect the error(s) and then correct any error(s) found on the line provided.

1. The subjects were 100 patients with unstable angina who admitted to CCU.

2. 4% of the patients were died.

3. This study showed a positive relation between leukocyte counts with coronary events in unstable angina patients and thus this factors had prognostic importance.

4. Patient selection criteria includes those with angina ,class III-IV.

5.Thus far 10 patients have been treated.

6. An average of 20 channels were made.

7. The species of animals used in cardiovascular studies depends on the intended research.

8. The pig’s anatomy is similar to human’s.

9. There have been few studies in this regards.

10. We recommend that special center for Redo-CABG prepared.

11. Ischemic heart disease and depression are two common disease.

12.In our study , the prevalence of depression were similar in sex.

13. According to international assays and the results got from our study depressed heart patients have high cholesterol and triglyceride level.

14.These patients have the more history of ischemic cardiac disease.

15. Our study and other studies which performed before showed depression acts as an independent risk factor in heart diseases.

16. So far there has been only a limited attempts to stratify the risk among these patients.

17. This study aims to evaluate the relation between peripheral monocytosis at first day after AMI.

18. Although the measurement of blood pressure by Mercury sphygmomanometers is the gold standard of blood pressure measurement and the blood pressure describe according to millimeter of mercury but in previous century measurement of blood pressure in children and neonates had many changes and many studies to answer questions like… .

19. When this devices are used correctly can be an accurate estimate of blood pressure .

20. This study was designed to determined serum digoxin level in 5 days and 7 days regime.

21.Lipoprotein (a) that made up of an low density lipoprotein linked to apolipoprotein (a) is a controversial risk factor.

22. The pressure measured by two person separately by pulse method and pulse oxymeter.

23. The difference of mean blood pressures in this to method was 9 mmHg.