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Detecting Writing Errors

ارسال  شده توسط  ابوالقاسم آوند در 21/8/86 2:38 عصر

Limiting Statements


1. Smoking weak the body slowly.

2. Smoking creat bronchit

3. Smoking is less danderous than Extazi.

4. Smoking lead to different kinds of diseases.

5. The problems between generations have became a social problems.


 


6. The problems between generations can damages the society.

7. The problems between generations is severe in the USA.

8. The problems between generations is the same as the problems depend on the different cattures.

9. Diseases caused by smoking is more harmful than those caused by

10. Smoking is increased within the last two years.ادامه مطلب...


تمرین هاومطالب درس نگارش علمی

ارسال  شده توسط  ابوالقاسم آوند در 17/7/86 4:47 عصر

Academic Writing


Error Detection Exercise(2)


The following sentences contain errors. First , detect the error(s) and then correct any error(s) found on the line provided.


 


1. The subjects were 100 patients with unstable angina who admitted to CCU.


 


 


2. 4% of the patients were died.


 


 


3. This study showed a positive relation between leukocyte counts with coronary events in unstable angina patients and thus this factors had prognostic importance.


 


 


4. Patient selection criteria includes those with angina ,class III-IV.


 


 


5.Thus far 10 patients have been treated.


 


 


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تمرین هاومطالب درس نگارش علمی

ارسال  شده توسط  ابوالقاسم آوند در 17/7/86 4:42 عصر

Academic Writing


Error Detection Exercise(1)


Read the following sentences and detect any kinds of error(s), if any.


 



  1. All tries and researches for finding a drug or vaccine for AIDS expose to failure.

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  1. This virus killed the T cell that are the most important cells of immune system.

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..


 



  1. AIDS has three period.

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..


 



  1. The first is window period that last 6 mounts.

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  1. In this period, the disease don’t detected with blood test.

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  1. In this period the immune system fight with virus.ادامه مطلب...